13 noviembre, 2012

Assignment 3 Book Critique


Consoli Claudia
Book Critique
EAP
November 2012

Academic Writing
a Handbook for International Students
by Stephen Bailey
Routledge 2006 (2nd edition)
ISBN13 : 9-78-0-415-38420-9 (ppb)

A Review of : Academic Writing a Handbook for International Students
College and university writing has always posed a challenge for students. Non native speakers of English present a twofold problem when faced with academic assignments or tests. They have to meet the standards of the subject under study in the established academic style and they have to do it in a foreign language. Bailey (2006) offers a variety of suggestions to help beginner writers enter the world of academia.
His book is exactly what the title and subtitle suggest: A handbook for overseas students delving into the waters of academic writing. The book presents a clear four-part organization. The author has attempted a holistic vision to the world of academic writing. Each of the parts, subdivided in smaller chapters take the novice writer from the background of writing, through the complete process of writing(planning, organizing, editing and proofreading) to actual model pieces to help comprehension on what is expected of them in  the academic world.
Part 1 and Part 2 of the book explain and exemplify the relevant standards regarding the writing process and the elements of writing.  While Part 3 contains excellent practical grammatical  exercises, this is not a grammar book per se. Part 4 contains models including formal letters, Curriculum Vitae (CVs) and comparison and discussion essays.
By the end of the book, the reader will have a clear understanding of how to structure a variety of writing pieces and which criteria the pieces need to conform to. As Bailey(2006) states in the introduction ‘this practical book thoroughly explains the writing process and covers all the key writing skills.’(p. ii)
The book’s drawbacks stem from its advantages. The fact that such a wide range of issues is covered inevitably leads to reduced depth. More experienced writers would find the book lacking in more specific items such as text variety. These more advanced students would need more models including for instance research papers. It would also have been better if the author had contemplated different academic styles such as American Psychological Association( APA), Modern Language Association (MLA) and the like.
Overall, academic writing involves an understanding of writing genres, styles and layout. This book examines all of these aspects and, as such, may be interesting to freshmen students, native and non native alike. For these reasons, it is ideal as an addition to beginner writing courses.
References
Bailey, S. (2006). Academic Writing: A handbook for International Students (2nd ed.).Retrieved October 2012 ,from Taylor & Francis elibrary:http://npu.edu.ua/!ebook/book/djvu/A/iif_kgpm_t27.pdf.

Mid Term Annotated Bibliography


Stockwell, G (October 2012). Working with  Constrains in Mobile  Learning : A Response  to Ballance. Language Learning & Technology. 16, (3), 24–31 Retrieved October 2012 ,from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=20171
Mobile Assisted Language Learning (MALL) Is Here to Stay
Stockwell finds several areas of concern in Ballance’s(2012)  words. To begin with, Stockell (2012)declares that Ballance has preconceived ideas in his claim that MALL activities should not replicate pen a paper ones.  He goes on to explain that ‘the activities were developed as part of an intelligent system that kept detailed records of what learners knew based on the performance in [for example] the vocabulary activities’ Stockwell(2012 p 25).
In addition to that, Stockwell defines the complexity of the system of the activities for the mobile phones. This system included push and pull models, a variety of gradable interactive activities to cater to different learning styles and much more. What is more Stockwell refutes Ballance negative idea of replicating pen a paper activity types on MALL technology. Alluding that many mobile phone users incorporated traditional handwriting activities such as schedules, and calendars into mobile phones.
Furthermore Stockwell continues defying Ballance’s opinion about the impact of smart phone and their apps. Ballance has claimed that the new smart phones will instantly solve the technical disadvantages of Stockwell activities. Stockwell answers clearly that even though smart phones present some commendable advantages such as bigger screens and the mobile applications. This two supposed improvements could also be detrimental.
To conclude Stockwell proposed   that   teachers should move with the times and create and adapt activities to provide their students with the best possible type of learning resources considering the speed technology moves at.
References
Ballance, O (October 2012). Mobile Language  Learning: More Than Just “The Platform”. Language Learning & Technology. 16 (3), 21–23. Retrieved October 2012, from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=20170
Stockwell, G (October 2012). Working with  Constrains in Mobile  Learning : A Response  to Ballance. Language Learning & Technology. 16, (3), 24–31 Retrieved October 2012 ,from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=20171

Mid Term Outline



Consoli Claudia
MIDTERM
EAP
October 2012
1

Mobile Language Learning: More than just ‘the Platform’: An Outline
·         Purpose : To comment on Glen Stockwell’s  (2012)article on using mobile phones for vocabulary activities and  to examine the effect on the platform 
·         Thesis: Data suggests that Stockwell findings are not accurate enough even deficient in some aspects
·         Audience: readers of the journal, teachers and researches  
I    Definition
a.       Computer Assisted Language Learning (CALL)
b.      Mobile Assisted Language Learning (MALL)
II Platform
a.       Stockwell’s (2010) research
1.      Short presentation
2.      Problems
b.      Smart phones
1.      Advantages
2.      Solution to Stockwell platform problems
III Activities 
a.       Description, Assessment  and  judgement
b.      Web browser research incorporation
c.        Simple modifications to mobile phone  interface
IV  Learning Software
a.       Assumptions
1.      Software can or cannot be separated from the platform

b.      Response
V Conclusion
a.       MALL  towards apps technology
b.      MALL vs. CALL
c.       MALL  as replacement of existing language learning  resources


References
Ballance, O.J. (October 2012). Mobile language learning: more than just “the platform”. Language Learning & Technology. 16 (3), 21–23. Retrieved October 2012, from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=20170

Assignment 2

EAP
                                                                               CONSOLI CLAUDIA        
ACADEMIC SUMMARY

Writing for the World : A Summary
Turning digital natives into academic writers poses one of the most difficult tasks higher education teachers  face nowadays. In her article Tardy(2010) presents us with a way to tackle  such an accomplishment by reaching out to Wikipedia as a tool to introduce students into the world of academic and collaborative writing.
Despite its low credibility among some scholars, delving into Wikipedia's educational possibilities and opportunities may certainly be one solution to the task. Tardy’s (2010)article is mainly based in the use of Wikipedia as a collaborative writing tool. She defines the software and its advantages and  takes the digital plunge into a 8-steps - process approach to writing.
Her approach begins with an overview of the assignment where the rules  for length (500 words), the appropriate style (following Wikipedia’s stipulations and guidelines) and finally the publication stage.
Step number 1 requests the students to start examining the website, reading samples, drawing assumptions and conclusion from those samples. Step  2 takes students into the compiling of information and data collection journey. Step 3 asks them to create outlines to organize their work. Step 4  is the drafting stage. Drafts should include the necessary tags to later add the required references.
At Step 5 the revising stage has been reached. Reading, re-reading  and proofreading  are hard but necessary skills to perform. Step 6 goes directly into the formatting of the sources. Citation, footnotes and hyperlinks should be added at this stage. Steps 7deals with polishing .Finally, step 8 is the publishing of the piece of writing,.
            Accurate academic writing is a desirable literacy level for students to reach  although not necessarily an easy one to achieve. The Wikipedia writing and research  project could help bridge the gap from beginner writers to academic ones.
References
Tardy, C. M. , (2010). Writing for the world: Wikipedia as an introduction to academic writing. . English Teaching Forum. 1 , pp.12-27