13 noviembre, 2012

Assignment 3 Book Critique


Consoli Claudia
Book Critique
EAP
November 2012

Academic Writing
a Handbook for International Students
by Stephen Bailey
Routledge 2006 (2nd edition)
ISBN13 : 9-78-0-415-38420-9 (ppb)

A Review of : Academic Writing a Handbook for International Students
College and university writing has always posed a challenge for students. Non native speakers of English present a twofold problem when faced with academic assignments or tests. They have to meet the standards of the subject under study in the established academic style and they have to do it in a foreign language. Bailey (2006) offers a variety of suggestions to help beginner writers enter the world of academia.
His book is exactly what the title and subtitle suggest: A handbook for overseas students delving into the waters of academic writing. The book presents a clear four-part organization. The author has attempted a holistic vision to the world of academic writing. Each of the parts, subdivided in smaller chapters take the novice writer from the background of writing, through the complete process of writing(planning, organizing, editing and proofreading) to actual model pieces to help comprehension on what is expected of them in  the academic world.
Part 1 and Part 2 of the book explain and exemplify the relevant standards regarding the writing process and the elements of writing.  While Part 3 contains excellent practical grammatical  exercises, this is not a grammar book per se. Part 4 contains models including formal letters, Curriculum Vitae (CVs) and comparison and discussion essays.
By the end of the book, the reader will have a clear understanding of how to structure a variety of writing pieces and which criteria the pieces need to conform to. As Bailey(2006) states in the introduction ‘this practical book thoroughly explains the writing process and covers all the key writing skills.’(p. ii)
The book’s drawbacks stem from its advantages. The fact that such a wide range of issues is covered inevitably leads to reduced depth. More experienced writers would find the book lacking in more specific items such as text variety. These more advanced students would need more models including for instance research papers. It would also have been better if the author had contemplated different academic styles such as American Psychological Association( APA), Modern Language Association (MLA) and the like.
Overall, academic writing involves an understanding of writing genres, styles and layout. This book examines all of these aspects and, as such, may be interesting to freshmen students, native and non native alike. For these reasons, it is ideal as an addition to beginner writing courses.
References
Bailey, S. (2006). Academic Writing: A handbook for International Students (2nd ed.).Retrieved October 2012 ,from Taylor & Francis elibrary:http://npu.edu.ua/!ebook/book/djvu/A/iif_kgpm_t27.pdf.

Mid Term Annotated Bibliography


Stockwell, G (October 2012). Working with  Constrains in Mobile  Learning : A Response  to Ballance. Language Learning & Technology. 16, (3), 24–31 Retrieved October 2012 ,from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=20171
Mobile Assisted Language Learning (MALL) Is Here to Stay
Stockwell finds several areas of concern in Ballance’s(2012)  words. To begin with, Stockell (2012)declares that Ballance has preconceived ideas in his claim that MALL activities should not replicate pen a paper ones.  He goes on to explain that ‘the activities were developed as part of an intelligent system that kept detailed records of what learners knew based on the performance in [for example] the vocabulary activities’ Stockwell(2012 p 25).
In addition to that, Stockwell defines the complexity of the system of the activities for the mobile phones. This system included push and pull models, a variety of gradable interactive activities to cater to different learning styles and much more. What is more Stockwell refutes Ballance negative idea of replicating pen a paper activity types on MALL technology. Alluding that many mobile phone users incorporated traditional handwriting activities such as schedules, and calendars into mobile phones.
Furthermore Stockwell continues defying Ballance’s opinion about the impact of smart phone and their apps. Ballance has claimed that the new smart phones will instantly solve the technical disadvantages of Stockwell activities. Stockwell answers clearly that even though smart phones present some commendable advantages such as bigger screens and the mobile applications. This two supposed improvements could also be detrimental.
To conclude Stockwell proposed   that   teachers should move with the times and create and adapt activities to provide their students with the best possible type of learning resources considering the speed technology moves at.
References
Ballance, O (October 2012). Mobile Language  Learning: More Than Just “The Platform”. Language Learning & Technology. 16 (3), 21–23. Retrieved October 2012, from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=20170
Stockwell, G (October 2012). Working with  Constrains in Mobile  Learning : A Response  to Ballance. Language Learning & Technology. 16, (3), 24–31 Retrieved October 2012 ,from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=20171

Mid Term Outline



Consoli Claudia
MIDTERM
EAP
October 2012
1

Mobile Language Learning: More than just ‘the Platform’: An Outline
·         Purpose : To comment on Glen Stockwell’s  (2012)article on using mobile phones for vocabulary activities and  to examine the effect on the platform 
·         Thesis: Data suggests that Stockwell findings are not accurate enough even deficient in some aspects
·         Audience: readers of the journal, teachers and researches  
I    Definition
a.       Computer Assisted Language Learning (CALL)
b.      Mobile Assisted Language Learning (MALL)
II Platform
a.       Stockwell’s (2010) research
1.      Short presentation
2.      Problems
b.      Smart phones
1.      Advantages
2.      Solution to Stockwell platform problems
III Activities 
a.       Description, Assessment  and  judgement
b.      Web browser research incorporation
c.        Simple modifications to mobile phone  interface
IV  Learning Software
a.       Assumptions
1.      Software can or cannot be separated from the platform

b.      Response
V Conclusion
a.       MALL  towards apps technology
b.      MALL vs. CALL
c.       MALL  as replacement of existing language learning  resources


References
Ballance, O.J. (October 2012). Mobile language learning: more than just “the platform”. Language Learning & Technology. 16 (3), 21–23. Retrieved October 2012, from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=20170

Assignment 2

EAP
                                                                               CONSOLI CLAUDIA        
ACADEMIC SUMMARY

Writing for the World : A Summary
Turning digital natives into academic writers poses one of the most difficult tasks higher education teachers  face nowadays. In her article Tardy(2010) presents us with a way to tackle  such an accomplishment by reaching out to Wikipedia as a tool to introduce students into the world of academic and collaborative writing.
Despite its low credibility among some scholars, delving into Wikipedia's educational possibilities and opportunities may certainly be one solution to the task. Tardy’s (2010)article is mainly based in the use of Wikipedia as a collaborative writing tool. She defines the software and its advantages and  takes the digital plunge into a 8-steps - process approach to writing.
Her approach begins with an overview of the assignment where the rules  for length (500 words), the appropriate style (following Wikipedia’s stipulations and guidelines) and finally the publication stage.
Step number 1 requests the students to start examining the website, reading samples, drawing assumptions and conclusion from those samples. Step  2 takes students into the compiling of information and data collection journey. Step 3 asks them to create outlines to organize their work. Step 4  is the drafting stage. Drafts should include the necessary tags to later add the required references.
At Step 5 the revising stage has been reached. Reading, re-reading  and proofreading  are hard but necessary skills to perform. Step 6 goes directly into the formatting of the sources. Citation, footnotes and hyperlinks should be added at this stage. Steps 7deals with polishing .Finally, step 8 is the publishing of the piece of writing,.
            Accurate academic writing is a desirable literacy level for students to reach  although not necessarily an easy one to achieve. The Wikipedia writing and research  project could help bridge the gap from beginner writers to academic ones.
References
Tardy, C. M. , (2010). Writing for the world: Wikipedia as an introduction to academic writing. . English Teaching Forum. 1 , pp.12-27 

31 octubre, 2012

assignment 1


Consoli Claudia

Integrative Assignment

EAP

September  2012

1

 

 

                                           Discourse Community: A Definition

While a variety of definitions of discourse community could be found for instance  in a variety of articles, or in the  world wide web. This paper will use the definition suggested by Swales (1990) in order to describe such a community. His criteria establish six provisions to establish the existence of a discourse community

 

Common goals are a must of a discourse community. Members of such a community are able to function more efficiently professionally speaking if having a common and shared set of goals. These goals, aims and objectives empower the community towards its growth. This ‘communion’ of work towards an end is the first of the named provisions.

 

Thus, in order to achieve the proposed goals discourse communities must create, use and enhance different( and at the same time conventionally established) participatory mechanisms. The powerful dynamic of a discourse community may vary but as Rafoth(1988) notes the strength of a community lies  in the inclusion of writers, and readers. The wider the inclusion the better the discourse will become. Participatory roles could be more passive as in the case of reader or more active as in the case of writing but they should not necessarily be static.  The movement of the roles could  generate better results. Considering there is no learning without a behavioural change it could be extremely profitable for the community.

 

The exchange of information lies at the core of the community. Exchanging information provides the members  of the community the opportunity to discuss, debate, inform and grow.. For instance in a situated learning community ‘team teaching and collaborative planning typically requires teachers to discuss their beliefs and practices within the routines of their daily work.’ (Hoffman- Kipp, Artiles, Lopez- Torres, 2003)

Language is a powerful tool. Thus, discourse communities tend to  develop  community –specific genre  and highly specialized terminology for the benefit of their members to promote intelligible exchanges and to avoid misunderstandings.  This is illustrated in light of the  following quotation :  ‘communicative competence is described as what one must know  in order to use language appropriately.’ (Kutz, 1997).

                   Discourse communities as Zito notes ‘ … [are] a battleground for the right to speak with authority.’ To establish themselves as credible and be able to maintain their aimed reputation discourse communities must possess a high level of expertise.

                In conclusion when aiming to define a discourse community one must try to find the six provisions mentioned by Swales(1990) in his definition.

 

REFERENCES

Hoffman-Kipp, P., Artiles, A. J., & Lopez Torres, I. (2003). Beyond reflection: teacher learning as praxis. Theory into Practice. Retrieved October 2007, from http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_mONQM/is_3_42/ai_108442653

Kelly-Kleese, C. (2001). Editor’s choice: An open memo to Community College Faculty and Administrators. Community College Review. Retrieved October 2007, from http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0HCZ/is_1_29/ai_77481463

McLaughlin & Talbert, 1993. (Wenzlaff, T. L., & Wieseman, K.C. (2004). Teachers need teachers to grow. Teacher Education Quarterly. Retrieved October 2007,

from http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_qa3960/is_200404/ai_n9349405)
Swales, J. M. (1990). Genre analysis: English in academic and research settings. Cambridge, UK: Cambridge University Press

25 agosto, 2012

a letter of introduction


Dear teachers and classmates,
It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single teacher working more than 25 hours a week is in need of a rest.
Thats why I decided to wait for the right moment to write this letter. I wanted to do you justice. I just couldnt scribble a short note I needed to really pour myself into the page.
'Here's how it started. I'd never said a word. Not one word.' Actually I said a million words speaking nineteen to the dozen and finding than one language was not enough to express everything I wanted to say. That was the beginning of my learning English history. I needed more words to say more things. (The more in my life is just as important as the less; it all depends of the situation)
In my younger and more vulnerable years my father gave me some advice that I've been turning over in my mind ever since. Of course like everything else my father said it turned to be not only rubbish but absolutely useless in my word-revolving life. If I have to speak about my family I´ll have to say that Mr. C and Mrs. C, of number 814 in Tolosa, were proud to say that they were perfectly normal, thank you very much.
Again thats what they think. If you ask me, I would describe them as my family and other animals. (most of which you wouldnt like to meet even when drop dead drunk)
"All happy families are alike, but an unhappy family is unhappy after its own fashion."
And mine has not only its own fashion, but the complete works, with fashion line, catwalk, models, etc. you name it.
'It was a bright cold day in April and the clocks were striking thirteen' and misery was over in my life. I discovered I could do wonderful things. (by wonderful I mean, teach, write, tell stories and read)
So even though or maybe because of my family craziness I became what I am.
'In my time I have been called many things: sister, lover, priestess, wisewoman, friend, teacher, miss, seño, profe and queen.'
The queen nickname belongs to my prince of a husband (aka Himself)
Himself found me one day in the middle of words, and books and a story. And he says he just fell for me and my world.
'Soon it would be too hot.' To even think let alone write. So to round things off I should tell you that starting this course of studies is very exciting and I am very eager to learn. I have been reading over your blogs and the first thing that came to my mind was the incredible feeling of belonging to a group of people interested in learning and improving. Sometimes along theschoolway we meet with people who are institutionalized and they can make a dent in our enthusiasm so when I read your blogs I felt happy to be sharing this hunger for learning and thriving in our teaching profession. I started teaching at a very young age and I feel it is the best job in the world. As you can see from my writing I am not very good at formal writing. I have devoted myself to teaching elementary students for the last ten years and even though methodologically speaking they are a great challenge language wise they are not so my English has become a little bit rusty so I beg you patience of you till I get my academic writing skills sharpened.
Reading is a passion of mine and I do love a mystery. So all the pink lines in this letter are famous lines from books (I wont tell you which ones yet) but our famous friend Google.com can help you find the answers if you dont already know them
It was the best of times, it was the worst of times writing this letter to you. I hope that in the future we can become more than colleagues why not even friends.
Just in case you were wondering all this happened, more or less'
Kind regards, Claudia 

22 agosto, 2012

the best of times...


Hello fellow classmates
my name is Claudia and this is my blog
I have been a teacher of English for the last fifteen years of my life and I even though there were difficult times I have loved every minute of it.
In charles dickens's words
It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to heaven, we were all going direct the other way 


going back to uni means a lot to me. I am really happy about starting this new course of studies. Hope to meet you all soon

claudia